yes, and, i'm sorry, but,
4:16 AM"hello. can i just ask you, what is your name? do you like sushi? and, i like your style, and your hair, and the way that you raise your hand."
hi.
my name is just friends, so, please don't touch me
and, i don't like sushi, and, i am wearing my sister's jeans
my name is thank you for the compliment, but,
my hair is fake, and, i really don't like talking in class
i mean, i think you are sweet, but, i am becoming uncomfortable
i am trying, don't you see? i have tried
i am trying
just to focus
but, you are much too handsome,
but, you are much too handsome,
for me
yes, and, i'm sorry, but,
you are much too handsome
and, you are much too him,
for me.
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Your words are great, and this pacing and flow you fit them to is spectacular.
ReplyDelete"my name is just friends, so, please don't touch me"
ReplyDeleteGosh I just wish I could make myself feel this way for real.
"You are much too him, for me"
ReplyDeleteHOLY "you are much too him, for me" wow.
ReplyDeleteah this is so good. so rhythmic.
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